短文改错 以下短文有10处错误

这里是短文改错的详细解释:

Dear Tom,

How are you recently? I've just returned back from my holiday in Tibet last month. The scenery in Tibet was amazing beautiful. I had never seen anything quite like that before. The snow mountains were towering and majestic.Walking alone the peaceful lakes, I felt extremely relax and comfortable. The local Tibetans were friendly and hospitality. They were always smiling and wave to us when we passed by.However, the living conditions on the plateau were harsh. The air was thin, and I often felt shortage of breath. And it was very cold, even in July. Most of the time I had to wear my heavy coats to keep warmth.

Overall, this trip was unforgettable. The natural scenery in Tibet was peaceful breathtaking. I hope you can go there for your holidays next year. You will discover a totally different world on the roof of the world!

Yours,

Mary 

1. recently → lately  更合适的词choice

2. returned back → returned   冗余,返回已经表示了回来的意思

3. amazing beautiful →amazingly beautiful     修饰词放错位置

4. had never→ have never   过去完成时态错误

5. towering and majestic → toweringly majestic   修饰词位置更好 

6. relax → relaxed   缺少动词的过去分词形式 

7. hospitality → hospitable  修饰人时要用形容词 

8. shortage → short   nome后不需要ness

9. warmth → warm   同上 

10. peaceful breathtaking → peacefully breathtaking  修饰词位置